MY 1ST SPEECH EVALUATION ON "FALL AND MOVE ON"

SPEECH EVALUATION ON "FALL AND MOVE ON"

Smile. TM Susan,

Congratulations. You have achieved your speech objective. You have varied your voice, pitch, rate and tones according to the content of your entire speech. Well done.

Your speech title, "Fall and move on" is direct and straightforward. You began with a story, a great fall incident and slowly relate it to the other three personal falls experience in broke off relationship with your boyfriend, other relationship and your business failure. Your content is well crafted. Smooth and easy to follow. I like your choice of picture word, which was able to help me to figure out how severe is your fall. I can imagine its impact, if not for your "soft part" to cushion the gravity of your fall and "hard part" of your jaw prevented you from spending millions of dollars' on facial surgery. With your hand gesture of pointing the soft part at the front of your body and your jaw, you have directed my focus on how these two key areas. How they reduced the impact of the fall on you. I must say that you are creative in this sense. Well done and keep up your good work.

Another point I like about your speech is the way you applied the rule of three to describe your emotion after the falls. Devastated, Despaired and Depressed. These words generate much greater gravity in term of magnitude.

To have a greater impact, perhaps you may change your title to "Fall, Stand and Move On". Follow by gesture of a fall, stand up and move on. With this, it is more memorable and easier to stick on.

Your eye contacts are good, though not balance. You had been more inclined to build eye contacts with the audiences at your right hand side. To complete and have a wider coverage, perhaps you too have eye contacts with your audiences at your left hand side especially when you raised those questions in your speech.

One last and important point is that you show your angry facial expression of anger and raised your tone to reflect your anger. Soften tones of voice when you are depressed.

Well done, TM Susan. Give HER another round of well deserved applause.

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OPPORTUNITY IS MISSED BY MAJORITY

That's why you need to equip yourself with the appropriate mindset before you can identify it.
Act upon to it and make it in your great favour.

YOU NEED TO GROW WEALTH EXPONENTIALLY

YOU NEED TO GROW WEALTH EXPONENTIALLY

If you think you can, you can.

If you think you can't, you can't.

Both are equally right.

Fellow Toastmasters, Ladies & Gentlemen.

How many of you seriously desire to grow your wealth exponentially? Please raise your hand. Fantastic, everyone does.

How many of you think that you can achieve what is in your desire? Excellent, everyone does again.

Big congratulation to you. You have won half the battle. Then you should proceed to conceive before you can make it Real.

I like to share with 3 reasons why you need to grow your wealth exponentially.

REASON #1 We are living in a world WITH full of uncertainty.

Corporate,both huge and small collapsing one after the other. Financial scandals are happening at their new records height and it is no longer shameful any more. Country goes bankrupt one after the other is become norm.

You can't leave it to chance. You need to take control of your destiny. You are the captain of your body and mind. You have everything to grow your wealth exponentially regardless of your current status, background and financial status.

You do it for yourself and the people you love. Growing your wealth exponentially is to have better security. Who agrees with this statement?

To cite you an example, I have been growing my wealth since I was 14. Now, I have been reaping my other sources of leveraged income ranging from interest, dividend, rental, advertisement and investment incomes.

My next level is to build my royalty income through publication and training workshop.

I believe you too want to take control over your time and life. You too want money to work for you.

REASON #2 Globally High inflation regime

With the current high inflation regime, the inflation will eat into your wealth if you don't grow it higher than the real inflation rate. 

You need to safely and steadily build up money so as to give you financial security in retirement. You will have enough money to pay for holidays..and any unexpected health scares as you get older. In short, you will be able to enjoy your golden years without any financial worries.

REASON #3 Money is not evil.

Money is not evil. It is greed of money that is evil. Once you have more Money, you will have More Freedom and More Time to spend with your love ones. By then, you are able to live your life that you choose and not playing by someone else's rule.

You are designed to get the best for yourself. Don't think that it is impossible. Rephrase it as I'm possible. You really can!!

The wealthier you are, the greater magnitude of people you can help. Then uou can give your money and your time in support of those good causes, like donating to charity organisations. The primary beneficiary of such noble actions is always the one who gives, not the one who receives. ~ Napoleon Hill.

Why I say everyone can.

a) It is not difficult. 

You don't need to be a sky rocket Scientist. But, a simple mathematics and common sense are needed to do well financially.

Wealth is within your grasp. Everyone has the capacity of achieving because it is inside you.

What you need to do is constantly apply Knowledge Doing Gap strategies. I have been applying it to stay above poverty and also during my professional days as Financial Controller to turnaround a company during Asean Financial Crisis in 1997. My other colleagues have been working closely and drastically to bring in cash flow and cutting down our costs so as to keep the company floating

b) Start with a dream.

A daytime dream that keeps you awake and not the dream you made during your sleep. Without a dream it will definite guarantee failure. Having it, wont guarantee that you will succeed, but at least there is a chance for you to succeed.

Get ready and be prepared, then apply it with action and tangible tools to make it real. You can create what you conceive in your mind. Napolean Hill.

c) Follow by action

A vision and goal without action is a wish. By doing, you will make it REAL.

Sometimes you gain, sometimes you learn. 

With the right guidance and proven recipe FOR WEALTH, you too can rise from struggle to success.

There is an exact science behind success, But there are most certainly no secrets when it comes to creating wealth or whatever other desires you may inspire to create for yourself.

d) Legacy

Wealth is Nothing More Than An Individual Choice just as failure is a choice. It is derived and made possible as the result of a choice.  

The question is whether you have the desire to claim your success, which I believe all of you have.

Never let your "Unconscious Choices" limit your "Consciously Desired" Results.

Pretty cool don't you think?

The answer will become more than apparent as THE STORY reaches its conclusion.

You are convinced to sign up with our workshop, "From Organic to Exponential Wealth" workshop. 

AS WITHIN, SO WITHOUT. You are the sculptor of your external reality.

Wealth is well within your grasp and easily attainable if you will only find that "inner place" and make the choice to "allow" it to be so.

You have already taken a MAJOR step by listening to this preview. Now, why not you choose the next step and leave behind a good legacy.

One more thing. Prepare to get empowered.

Back to you, TEM.

James Oh

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WISDOM FROM MAHATMA GANDHI

LIVE LIKE CANDLE

THE WHOLE WORLD IS MINE

The World is Mine

Today, upon a bus, I saw a very beautiful woman  And wished I were as beautiful.  When suddenly she rose to leave,  I saw her hobble down the aisle.  She had one leg and wore a crutch.  But as she passed, she passed a smile.  Oh, God, forgive me when I whine.  I have two legs; the world is mine.  I stopped to buy some candy.  The lad who sold it had such charm.  I talked with him, he seemed so glad.  If I were late, it'd do no harm.  And as I left, he said to me,  "I thank you,  you've been so kind.  It's nice to talk with folks like you.  You see," he said, "I'm blind."  Oh, God, forgive me when I whine.  I have two eyes; the world is mine.  Later while walking down the street,  I saw a child I knew.  He stood and watched the others play,  but he did not know what to do.  I stopped a moment and then I said,  "Why don't you join them dear?"  He looked ahead without a word.  I forgot, he couldn't hear.  Oh, God, forgive me when I whine.  I have two ears; the world is mine.  With feet to take me where I'd go..  With eyes to see the sunset's glow.  With ears to hear what I'd know.  Oh, God, forgive me when I whine.  I've been blessed indeed, the world is mine. This is just a simple reminder, we have so much to be thankful for!

TAKE THE CHALLENGE

Look we live in the real world and the forecast, is partly scary. with a chance of rejection.

I know it's popular to say you should have self-esteem and self-confidence — and brightly go forth in the world.

However, I am telling you is that it is OK to be afraid. Perhaps it is OK — a little fear is probably good for you!

The simple reason is FEAR leads to over-preparation. When you over-prepare, ACTUAL failure becomes a much more remote possibility.

In fact, having fear, and then, proceeding in spite of it, is where REAL confidence comes from. It's the accumulation of experiences in your life in which you overcome your fear and try something — even if you really do fail at it! — that leads to authentic self-esteem.

TO FISH NOT TO FISH (SPEECH AT AFC TM)

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TWO WAYS TO BE FOOLED

ACCEPTING THE TRUTH IS THE ONLY WAY TO SET YOU FREE.