Speech evaluation on CC # 4
Smile at the speaker. TM Priscilla, Congratulations.
You have achieved your speech objective. You
have communicate your ideas clearly, accurately and vividly by
applying the golden rule of Keep It Simple and Short
(Sweet) throughout your entire speech. You
used lots of descriptive words that created mental image and there is no jargon
being used. Well done. TM
Priscilla.
I like your speech
title, "The Quest For One". You not only raised my curiousity
to find what is the One you are talking about, but also keep me in
suspense before
you told me the question that you hated to answer- "What are you going to
study?" I can't imagine that how it can bother you so much until
you told me that
you even ran to hide in a corner. That really fascinated me to visualise your
feeling at that particular situation.
To make it more
impactful, perhaps you may throw us question such as "How many of you have
questions that you hate to answer?" I believe everyone
has, right?
Follow by telling us
that you too feel the same way in your speech.
I also noticed that
you have good story telling skills where you are able to describe very well
your emotion at that particular situation and time. Well done and give her
another round of applause.
Perhaps , another
point which you may add to your speech is about your facial expression
when you hear the hated question of what are you going to study? by raising your
tone. These will generate much greater gravity in term of magnitude.
Your eye contacts are
good, though not balance. You had been more inclined to build eye contacts with
the audiences at your left hand side. To complete and have a wider
coverage, perhaps you should make full use of your stage and build eye contacts
with your audience at right hand side especially when you raised those
questions in your speech.
One last and
important point is that you have good voice projection, loud and clear
and I believe you should capitalise on your gift.
Well done, TM Priscilla
and I look forward to your next speech. Give HER another round of well
deserved applause.
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